I sat down a while back and had this idea for a wonderful [in my mind] story,
I actually sat down and wrote the tiniest bit of it but as
I read over [which Ive been doing for over a month] I'm not satisfied in the least bit.
Your thoughts?
Two Girls and a Gay.
It was the summer before their senior year when Nataly Brande, Diane Belmont and Andrew King decided that the moment their caps from graduation hit the ground they'd move in together. The bar had been set high for their future apartment; close to Starbucks, 3 bedroom and not thousands of stairs. Then finally after four months of nothing they found it, Apartment 12-A, 8th floor in the Jackson apartment-complex. Now don't get me wrong, there were a lot of stairs but the elevators made up for it and having all those stairs meant less trips to the gym's StairMaster. The apartment was everything they could hope for: Spacious, bright, amazing view of downtown and right next door to a Starbucks. It seemed as if they were already moved in before the down-payment was even put down. (Total hours it took them to move in after the papers were signed: three and a half). Luckily for them they all had football players wrapped around their fingers so all they had to do was sit back and enjoy the view or men, sweat and muscles.
...thoughts?
I actually sat down and wrote the tiniest bit of it but as
I read over [which Ive been doing for over a month] I'm not satisfied in the least bit.
Your thoughts?
Two Girls and a Gay.
It was the summer before their senior year when Nataly Brande, Diane Belmont and Andrew King decided that the moment their caps from graduation hit the ground they'd move in together. The bar had been set high for their future apartment; close to Starbucks, 3 bedroom and not thousands of stairs. Then finally after four months of nothing they found it, Apartment 12-A, 8th floor in the Jackson apartment-complex. Now don't get me wrong, there were a lot of stairs but the elevators made up for it and having all those stairs meant less trips to the gym's StairMaster. The apartment was everything they could hope for: Spacious, bright, amazing view of downtown and right next door to a Starbucks. It seemed as if they were already moved in before the down-payment was even put down. (Total hours it took them to move in after the papers were signed: three and a half). Luckily for them they all had football players wrapped around their fingers so all they had to do was sit back and enjoy the view or men, sweat and muscles.
...thoughts?
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